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class work

Task 1                                                                those who have never seen a living Martian…                                                        a strange atmosphere…                                there was something fungoid in the oily brown skin…                                                     something in the clumsy deliberation…      even this first encounter…

 

 

class work

13.5.16

What the teacher said.

I think the teacher enjoys her job because she says she is full of energy, but she also doesn’t like her job because she talks a lot about flying and that could symbolise freedom.

Qoatations:                                                        I’ve had enough of the earthday crust.      I want to sing out load.                             I’m in a high mood.

The poet is trying to make an image of exploring the world while relaxing, but not to relax to much because everyone has to come back some day. Unless you migrate.

 

 

 

 

class work

Atargatis was a goddess and was also known by other names like Derceto, Decketo and Dea Syria. People belive that she was the first mirmaid in the history of the world. But she wasn’t always a mirmaid.

Task 2                                                                marvel                                                             heavenly                                                            wonderful                                                          diverse                                                              holy

Task 3

Lucian described it in positive ways that make me think the he likes the look of the temple because he hasn’t writen anything negative about the temple.

Task 4                                                                afar                                                                   marvel                                                               numerous                                                         diverse                                                               fragrance

challenge

I could see the building from afar.

the piece of art was marvel.

there were numerous animals at the zoo.

the puzzle was diverse.

The fragrance smelt nice.

Autobiography


My name is Daniel Martin De Caries Goncalves and i live in a flat with my brother, my mum ,my sister and my dog, my turtle and my three fish. I also used to have a hamster called Coco because of his grey-ish brown fur, but Unfortunately he died last year. It may seem that I have a lot of pets but to me it is completely normal even though to other people it is quite a lot of animals in our house since our flat is quite small compared to an ordinary house but I am used to it now.

When I was five my gran dad had adopted an ostrich, and he gave it a room to share with a blue macaw. Obviously they shared the room since they were both birds. I don’t remember what gender they were but they still were very fun to play with. But my problem was that my gran dad lives in Venezuela, so I would only be able to go once a year since it was so expensive.The last time I went to Venezuela was when I was nine, but since then my grandma came to England for a month like when I go to Venezuela for one month. But now I don’t go to Venezuela because of political issues.

As you can guess I really want to go to Venezuela to see my grandad, but I can’t go until next year because the prime minister was part of a gang but soon they are going to change the primeminister and I will be able to go there once things have calmed down and when it is safer there.As you should now by now I am Venezuelan, English and I am also Portuguese because of my grandparents although my mom was born in Venezuela. My dad is also Portuguese.

My birthday is coming on the 30th of April so I want to go to Algarve, because my grandparents moved to Portugal, so I want to see them for my birthday.

On a completely different note I am a bit sad because soon my sister is going to move out and it feels strange because she has lived with me my whole life and I’m so used to seeing her going to work in the morning. I will also miss my nephew, although he isn’t my sisters son but my soon to be brother in law’s son, he is still part of the family.

On a happier note when my sister moves out I will have my own room, because now I am sharing a room with my older brother. But this isn’t so happy because my sister is going to take most of the furniture so I will have to go to ikea and my experiences with my mum in ikea took hours, and for some weird reason we went IKEA for mothers day but I didn’t mind because it was mothers day after all.

this has been a description of my life, I hope you enjoyed it.

class work

 

When one story ends another one starts and this one is just about to start, in a small village where our hero Tray is born in a cottage. As he grows he grows in strength and gains trust.

At nine he had befrended a dragon, a beast that has never been peaceful with man kind or any other living beings. Tray had an idea, he took the lonley baby dragon to the village, he showed every one he knew. He examined the dragon and decided to keep it.

He grew up with the dragon but one of his friends asked him”what are you going to call it”. From that day on he called the dragon Gus. At thirteen Tray’s parents died but




they where maturing, they had fought many battles in the past. Tray was now localy famous but he had to find a faster way to travel places. He looked over at his partner Gus.

but it was only then he had thought about teaching him to fly, but Tray didn’t know how to fly himself. So he had to find an expert at flying he looked at Gus again. Tray had another one of his great ideas he decided to find another dragon a dragon that knows how to fly.

He went back to where he found Gus, he found a nest a nest with one egg. This reminded him of the moment he met Gus when he was nine years of age. Tears came out of his eyes. But suddenly out of nowhere he sees a shadow in the sky. Was it a dragon? He looked closer, he saw three heads. He remembered a myth that he was told when he was a little boy it went a bit like this “when you venture into the dark woods you will see a shadow in the skies you will never return to the village.”

Tray decided to go with his guts and face this three headed beast. But Gus stoped Tray like he knew this creature like it was a reletive of some sort, like a mother, the shadow in the sky slowly lowered to the ground, it was a dragon, a mother dragon to be specific. The mother dragon was friendly and playfull he noticed something strange he looked at his hand, he saw that he had claws, he looked at his back he saw wings sprout from his back. He was transforming into a dragon. He actually enjoyed this transformation, he wanted to give Gus the family he never had.


 

Daniel’s homework

out of its depths and dirty surge

coffers of coiled gold

 I think that out of its depths and dirty surge means that                                                                     something is coming from a deep cave or piece of land.                                                                     it could also mean that a living beast is under the ground                                                                  making a lot of noise and its disturbing other creatures                                                                     and animals.

creative writing


3/2/16

A long time ago in an island far far away… a youthful beast was born crying, pooping and peeing all day but on his special day of the year his mother Grendles mother had told him to grow up. He had to do what every baby is scared to do… he had to become potty trained!… he was trifled of the wooden bowl in front of him it was called the potty, and the writing carved on this side it said Grendle. The horror he thought.

He couldn’t take it any more he ran in circles around the room in rage and broke the door down. His mother saw the potential her son had. Grendle never came back but 3 days later he came and he came with food, with the flesh of rotting humans and animals his mother was proud. Back in the village… funeral after funeral peasants tears running down their faces and families finding it difficult  to make a living.

the poor where even poorer and the rich where wealthier the village became emptier and bodies started rotting. Grendle became a problem. Back with Grendle it was like an all you can eat buffet with rotting bodies every where…

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