When one story ends another one starts and this one is just about to start, in a small village where our hero Tray is born in a cottage. As he grows he grows in strength and gains trust.
At nine he had befrended a dragon, a beast that has never been peaceful with man kind or any other living beings. Tray had an idea, he took the lonley baby dragon to the village, he showed every one he knew. He examined the dragon and decided to keep it.
He grew up with the dragon but one of his friends asked him”what are you going to call it”. From that day on he called the dragon Gus. At thirteen Tray’s parents died but
they where maturing, they had fought many battles in the past. Tray was now localy famous but he had to find a faster way to travel places. He looked over at his partner Gus.
but it was only then he had thought about teaching him to fly, but Tray didn’t know how to fly himself. So he had to find an expert at flying he looked at Gus again. Tray had another one of his great ideas he decided to find another dragon a dragon that knows how to fly.
He went back to where he found Gus, he found a nest a nest with one egg. This reminded him of the moment he met Gus when he was nine years of age. Tears came out of his eyes. But suddenly out of nowhere he sees a shadow in the sky. Was it a dragon? He looked closer, he saw three heads. He remembered a myth that he was told when he was a little boy it went a bit like this “when you venture into the dark woods you will see a shadow in the skies you will never return to the village.”
Tray decided to go with his guts and face this three headed beast. But Gus stoped Tray like he knew this creature like it was a reletive of some sort, like a mother, the shadow in the sky slowly lowered to the ground, it was a dragon, a mother dragon to be specific. The mother dragon was friendly and playfull he noticed something strange he looked at his hand, he saw that he had claws, he looked at his back he saw wings sprout from his back. He was transforming into a dragon. He actually enjoyed this transformation, he wanted to give Gus the family he never had.
May 27, 2016 at 10:34 am
I really enjoyed reading this. It follows the conventions of a myth well. I amm interested in the idea of a quest where the protagonist has a special relationship with a normally dangerous being.
1) Look at your third paragraph – how can your meaning be made clearer? Are there wors missing?
2) Be sure each sentence starts with a capital letter
3) Always re-read and edit spelling
4) Look at your choice of names – do these suit the tone and era of your story?
Boost achieved!